Foxbatkllr
Well-Known Hunter
Its good for a first attempt, but here are some observations (Please don't take these suggestions the wrong way, I'm trying to help out) :
		
		
	
	
		
	
		
	
		
	
	
		
			
		
		
	
				
			- The neckhole is too square, it should be more rounded.
 - Shoulder to shoulder it is too wide. And we're not talking about it being too large size wise. It's the pattern.
 - The "piping" is wrong. It looks like there is no piping at all and it is just stitched. The piped edges should be more rounded.
 - There is too much velcro on the left shoulder. It should stop 1 inch from the shoulder seam. Also, on the left shoulder as you can see there is only the seam line. There are not 3 stitches like on the right shoulder.
 - The bottom of the sleeve openings should be more rounded.
 - The overall shoulder bell shape is not quite right. It also could use some padding.
 - The back of the vest, the 3 stitch lines stop at the piping rather than going all the way up.
 
			
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