I was waiting to see if anyone was going to be the first to give heavy feedback. I'll be the first
We're only here to push you more and more towards screen accuracy, so don't take anything personal. All of us here want you to get approved and start trooping!
Primary Feedback:
1) I count 8 ammo pouches. You should only have 7.
2) I think you said you have a Bobamaker flak jacket on the way? That's good because I know you have to have the piping on the seams of the neck, shoulders, and arm openings. You can't get approval without that.
3) I think you might need to invest in some Merona leather gloves that you get at Target. Your gloves have to be navy-blue, according to the CRLs. I don't know if your gloves would work well with dye?
4) I don't know if the back buckle for the ammo belt will be okay? Someone might have to shed some light on that.
Personal Feedback:
5) Most, if not all of your armor needs some good weathering. I'd recommend using a sponge and acrylic paint. Mix different paints to get a mud-like color (not too black). Dab the sponge in the paint and touch around the edges of all your armor. Use a bunched up paper towel to blot and remove any excess paint.
6) Your girth/ammo belt needs to be pulled up higher. I had this problem when I first suited up. You need to have a minimal gap between your girth and ab armor. I'd highly, highly recommend checking out Seeker's Flickr and visit his "Jango Armor Tips" Gallery. Connecting the cod/holsters/thighs/harness/ammo belt is key:
Collection: Jango Fett Costume
7) Consider attaching the center ammo pouch to your girth (with rivets). Your ammo belt should be on the upper part of your girth. You don't want it sagging down.
8) Consider sewing a little piece of velcro on each of your flight suit's ankles. The other piece can go underneath the top of your boot armor. This will keep your flight suit tucked underneath the boot armor.
9) Attach your holsters to your thigh armor.
10) Never get satisfied upgrading and pushing towards perfection
That's all I have for now. I'm sure there are others who might want to offer some suggestions. Looking forward to seeing the evolution of your suit.
--Ribann