Rough Draft of my First person story

Fifth Chapter Into Hell Again

When i was on Kamino a Group of Mandalorians Who masqueraded as the Mandalorian Protectors attacked Kamino. I Decided to head into Battle with my personal Squad of Advanced recon commandos, Most commonly Abbreviated as ARC Troopers. We Glided over the sky and entered hell, Feet first.
Further into the Battle. My Squad and I were Pinned down, my Squad mate who I named Galaak, honoring the Mandalorian who i thought was Dead. Called for Backup. After hearing "We need Re-enforcements at our location." I went into a Psychotic Battle Frenzy of sorts, similar too what happened at Galidraan 20 years before. I took my blaster rifle and sent burning plasma to the mandalorian protectors, I killed about 15 Mandalorian Brothers that day. I discovered their names and engraved them onto my beskar'gam. As a sign of Respect for those i killed, protecting what was left of Jango Fett.
After the battle, the ARC trooper Who i named Je'karta, after my mentor was treating a wound i received in battle, on my back. He asked were i was going too after the War, I then told him very cryptically "Another war"
To be continued
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You must All noticed That the named Clones are named after MAndo's I served with, after i get the names of who Fought with Levi During The battle of Galidraan, and a few other names i Later invent when i get the names (in the Pen written story they are listed as "John Doe" XD)
You probably wonder why i named this chapter, Well im getting names in on this gig
 
You will feel like a deity once i am Finished the Finding of Galaak Chapter, lets say you find me, when im taken hostage by Death watch troopers
 
Sixth Chapter On the search For Galaak

After Leaving kamino I figured I should start searching for other mandalorians before I began the search for Galaak, I found two mandalorian females on coruscant and requested they join me in the search for galaak, The required a little 'persuasion' that is a little too graphic for this story, but after 'persuading' them to aid me in the search we proceeded to Dxun, and that happened like so...

There was an Awkward Silence in the transport, we were going too drop to Dxun at Five kilometers up, too low for my comfort. Kira yelled "We are at 10 kilometers, Helmets on!" we all put our helmet on in unison, each sealing with a hiss, she then said over comm" eight kilometers, seven kilometers, six kilometers, repulsor packs on!" My repulsor pack was already on "Zuka you first!" After hearing Zuka I jumped out counted too five and Activated my repulsor pack, then the unthinkable happened and the replusor pack jerked me away from the landing zone and shut off the only thing i had to say was "This is why i never drop from five kilometers" i hit the trees viciously and everything blacked out...
Too be continued
 
It wasn't because of an empty power cell they where charged before the drop, because of the jerk, the power cell disconnected from the Connection point
 
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