most tears won't be as big, and really try to limit the number of tears... remember sometimes less is more. Only thing I really see that you need to think about is the arms and legs... it's more a stylistic thing tho so... I think in your style it works great as is, but... just something to think about, for anime/fusion style comic art... the arms from wrist to elbow is the same length as from elbow to shoulder. The arms should be the same length as the legs (for proportionality's sake). The legs are the exact same length as the distance from the top of the head to the bottom of the groin. The leg measurement should start at the hip and does not include the boots, but does include the feet... I suggest drawing the figure first, then adding clothing/armor/weapons/boots/buy'ce OVER your figure... all in pencil BEFORE inking anything. Once that's done just erase the pencil lines and go forth with your colors and viola! A masterpiece... like I said tho with the proportions it's all stylistic, I like the style u're using... it's actually quite interesting
sorry, that turned into a not so quick tip! lol