Mullreel - It looks great. Here are my humble suggestions:
1. Agree with the lowering of your L side chest; it will also help close the gap with the ab plate.
2. Move the "D Ring" holder up until it is flush next to the girth; I don't think you should be able to see the leather piece.
3. Do you have plans of attaching your holsters to your thigh armor? If so, I think you might want to bring your L holster forward, just a bit.
Like I said, those are just my opinions. By the way, that flightsuit and vest look great!! Congrats!! It's all come together really well.
J-