Bro it looks good but some things Id have you consider changing would be the red on the helmet isnt supposed to cover the whole visor area its more of an outline like the EFX captain helmet,
And maybe try to make the mohawk mold into the helmet more? Also the pauldron should be like an EP3 pauldron kinda like the sideshow 12" figures yours looks like an animated one, not sure if you were going for a real life interpretation of the cartoon one for your own collection, but these are things that jump out at me on the the CRL for the ARC shows, not sure about the stripe on the chest there wasnt one on the cartoon or the ARC capt figure
I think the animated Fordo helmet had the faceplate completely red. That may be the look he's going for.
In the Animated Series it was full but in one of the "realistic" illustrations of him it was a small stripe. I don't recall how he looks on the newer figure that just came out.
AWESOME costume! Thanks for posting the pictures of this! It is amazing the detail you have!