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Rough Draft of my First person story

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    Re: Rough Draft of my First person story

    he he so do i... it actually drives ppl bonkers cuz they don't know what I'm saying! lol

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    Most people say when i insult them I DON'T UNDERSTAND and then i use that to say "Thats because you're an idiot"

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    Heh. Being able to swear and insult in a language that almost nobody understands is so much fun.

    Just a side note, shabuir can also mean something akin to "mother (a word I can't say in front of little ears)". The literal translation is "screwed up parent", but if you take into account that Mando'a is a fairly fluid language, you could reverse the meaning and well...you get the idea.

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    Re: Rough Draft of my First person story

    Kote!
    Kandosii sa ka'rta, Vode an.
    Coruscanta a'den mhi, Vode an.
    Bal kote, darasuum kote,
    Jorso'ran kando a tome.
    Sa kyr'am nau tracyn kad, Vode an.

    Kandosii sa ka'rta, Vode an.
    Coruscanta a'den mhi, Vode an.
    Bal...
    Motir ca'tra nau tracinya.
    Gra'tua cuun hett su dralshy'a.
    Aruetyc runi solus cet o'r.
    Motir ca'tra nau tracinya.
    Gra'tua cuun hett su dralshy'a.
    Aruetyc runi trattok'o.
    Sa kyr'am nau tracyn kad, Vode an!

    Vode An for ya Kal

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    Re: Rough Draft of my First person story

    Replace coruscanta With Mandalore and your set

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    Shuk'Om said: View Post
    Heh. Being able to swear and insult in a language that almost nobody understands is so much fun.

    Just a side note, shabuir can also mean something akin to "mother (a word I can't say in front of little ears)". The literal translation is "screwed up parent", but if you take into account that Mando'a is a fairly fluid language, you could reverse the meaning and well...you get the idea.
    AH mother****er ooooooh i like that

    Excuse the double post, felt like Separating the Messages because they are directed to two different people
    Last edited by Zuka; Nov 21, 2009 at 4:19 PM. Reason: Retarded misspell

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    Fourth Chapter Coldness of the soul
    The next two years Consisted Of Galaak and I Hunting Jedi, Galaak for sport, My reason is for revenge on what happened on Galidraan.
    On my Fifteenth birthday Galaak and I decided to Kill a group of jedi. consisting of Yoda, Dooku, Yaddle, and more jedi. Upon touchdown, Galaak and I became Separated, I made the Terrible Mistake of Fighting the Jedi. After Terribly wounding three jedi, Yoda cast a Jedi spell on me that Stunned me, or At least i think it was Yoda.

    I recall Waking up in an Empty tank of Bacta, During a conflict known as the clone wars, I met a Fellow Mandalorian Whose name Was Boba Fett, He then Told me what year it was. then I told him what his Father Did during the Mandalorian Civil war. Surprisingly Jango fett Mentioned me During teaching His son and the Clones on my Boldness and Bravery During the Battle of Galidraan.
    I then Helped him on the bounty Which he was Wounded in, I Treated his wounds, then he took me to Kamino, were I Met Taun we, She was a person full of love and kindness. I later left Kamino to Find Galaak.
    __________________________________________________ ______________
    Sorry if you guys are Upset because of the lack of combat, i promise combat in the next chapter
    Last edited by Zuka; Nov 27, 2009 at 8:21 PM.

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    You've got a talent man, keep on writing

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    *mumble*

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    Pacx, you are my inspiration to write so You're talent Far surpasses mine

    EDIT
    Thanks Jango, You got a talent also

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    ^_^ thats better xD

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    yeah Pacx is VERY talented with his story writing... still waiting for the amazing finish to the legend of Kal Waco

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    Aww kal, you's makin' me blush.

    And don't worry about Kal Waco- he's almost done.

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    sorry pacx thought that you knew that your awesome on my thread

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    I do ner'vod... i do. It's just nice to be told. :P

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    Remember Ner'vode Being told that your talented is excellent

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    yeah have ya seen my new sketch on my thread no one has said anything yet. i feel kind of bad.

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    *im off to thar noa*

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    Fifth Chapter Into Hell Again

    When i was on Kamino a Group of Mandalorians Who masqueraded as the Mandalorian Protectors attacked Kamino. I Decided to head into Battle with my personal Squad of Advanced recon commandos, Most commonly Abbreviated as ARC Troopers. We Glided over the sky and entered hell, Feet first.
    Further into the Battle. My Squad and I were Pinned down, my Squad mate who I named Galaak, honoring the Mandalorian who i thought was Dead. Called for Backup. After hearing "We need Re-enforcements at our location." I went into a Psychotic Battle Frenzy of sorts, similar too what happened at Galidraan 20 years before. I took my blaster rifle and sent burning plasma to the mandalorian protectors, I killed about 15 Mandalorian Brothers that day. I discovered their names and engraved them onto my beskar'gam. As a sign of Respect for those i killed, protecting what was left of Jango Fett.
    After the battle, the ARC trooper Who i named Je'karta, after my mentor was treating a wound i received in battle, on my back. He asked were i was going too after the War, I then told him very cryptically "Another war"
    To be continued
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    You must All noticed That the named Clones are named after MAndo's I served with, after i get the names of who Fought with Levi During The battle of Galidraan, and a few other names i Later invent when i get the names (in the Pen written story they are listed as "John Doe" XD)
    You probably wonder why i named this chapter, Well im getting names in on this gig

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    Nicely done bro! I'm feeling like a legend already

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    You will feel like a deity once i am Finished the Finding of Galaak Chapter, lets say you find me, when im taken hostage by Death watch troopers

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    Until i get a few name Ideas i Can't move this story onward

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    oooh death watch... dikutla shabiuire! (not u, the death watch) lol

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    what kinda names you looking for, cause i can probably help with that.. somewhat

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    Say 3 more mandalorian names
    and then 15 mandalorian names

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